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Tuesday, May 26, 2020

Marleigh returning to school

             Kia ora readers, its Marleigh today I am going to share my first draft of some writing. My first draft from some writing is about returning to school my teacher gave us some instructions and we had to talk about how we were feeling. About going back to school we did some writing and high lighted the feeling words and I want to show you my writing.
      Also feel free to give some feedback!!!


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  1. AnonymousMay 26, 2020 at 12:51 PM

    Talofa lava Marleigh. I like how you said for breakfast I had froot loops because I have froot loops sometimes in the morning. Next time you could tell more detail about what you did the night before school started. I also felt shy entring the school gates. I have one question before I go. Why were you so proud of yourself? Have a great day and see you soon! Bye!

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    1. AnonymousJune 29, 2020 at 11:14 AM

      Talofa lava Krystallynna thanks for the nice feedback comment. Yes I love fruit loops but it has a weird taste. Your right is well I could of reread it and added detail. I was proud of myself because I wasn't nervous anymore. Before I go I have a question what made you say put in some more detail???

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  2. Mrs CassidyMay 26, 2020 at 7:30 PM

    Hello Marleigh.
    I was nervous too on my first day back.I think it was because I hadn't talked to any body from school for quite a while.It's been good catching up with everyone.
    What have you enjoyed most about being back?.

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  3. Mrs CassidyJune 3, 2020 at 6:33 PM

    Hello Marleigh.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  4. Mrs CassidyJune 9, 2020 at 6:13 PM

    Hello Marleigh.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.

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  5. Mrs CassidyJune 22, 2020 at 7:29 PM

    Hello Marleigh.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.

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