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Showing posts with label writiing. Show all posts

Thursday, May 27, 2021

Procedure on how to make a hot chocolate

Kia ora readers, In room 9 we have been writing procedures on how to make a hot chocolate.

A procedure is a set of instructions for how to do something. We made a slide show and wrote a set of instructions and steps.

I hope you enjoy and feel free to give feedback!


Thursday, September 3, 2020

Snapshot Writing!

In room 11 we made pictures and made them look really cool. We had to show how we were feeling at that time with face expressions. We took photos on the ipad's and uploaded it to the Chromebook then we posted it on our blogs and I would like to show you mine!

I was at Jurassic park and I saw a dinosaur escape from his cage I ran as fast as I could. I stopped running when I was at the Auckland sky tower. I climbed to the very top and was struggling to balance I saw the dinosaur under me I was scared to death. My white flip flops rocket lanched off my foot flying in the air like a bird. I fell off the tower and waited for the end of me. The dinosaurs mouth was open ready to chomp me up like a cookie. Looking down at the dinosaurs mouth I could see sharp teeth a massive tonge. I said goodbye to my flip flops and waited for the first bite on my hand it was the end of me.

Thursday, August 13, 2020

The Present

 RA TA TA TA the lights of the tv glooming from darkness to light PEW the boy was so focused and engrossed about his game most of his attention went to the tv  .The boy had rosy red cheeks and was wearing a dark blue hoodie. His brown eyes stared at the tv.His beautiful black haired mother came in she looked tired because the  weight of the box. She was wearing a white shirt and some dark blue pants with a tiny box.The box reminded me of a hot chocolate that I drank for breakfast. The boy was really confused. His mother opened the blinds and said “open the present I got  for you”a present for me”answered the boy. He opened the box and there was a blonde tiny dog. The boy was excited at first but then his mouth dropped and his eyebrows pointed down and put a angry face. He saw 3 legs instead of 4. He threw the dog on the white carpet that looked like sheep's wool.The boy scoffed while the dog started running around the living room. The dog found a red and kicked it to the boy. The boy looked at the ball and threw it.

The dog ran over to get its ball when it rolled over inside the box that he was packed in. Just like that the dog got stuck inside the box.

The dog was moving around lots in the box eventually the dog got out the box.The boy was smiling but he turned his head away from happy to a frown. The dog ran over to get its toy holding  it in his mouth. He dropped the ball next to the boy's foot the boy was ready to make a bond with the dog. The boy got up on 1 leg and picked up some long grey crutches. While the dog was sitting there confused at how he was different. It had seemed that the dog and the boy were completely even. They finally made a bond and became best bros for Internity.


Wednesday, July 29, 2020

Opening sentence for my story

Hello Readers, 
We are learning to write an interesting first sentence to hook our reader.

My first sentence was" One day there was a boy chilling on his Xbox."
This is my improved sentence "RA TA TA TA the lights of the tv glooming
from darkness to light PEW BOOM the boy was focused and engrossed about his game
most of his attention went to the tv". 

I think my updated sentence is way better than the last what do you think ??

Does my opening sentence hook my attention?

Friday, June 26, 2020

My Giraffe poem

In room 11 on Thursdays and Fridays we have Miss Nichols. For writing we did Colour poems and Acrostic poems about animals & insects. I choose a animal my animal was a giraffe heres my giraffe poem. Acrostic poems are poems in which the first letter of each line spells out a word or message about the topic. I choose a animal my animal was a giraffe heres my giraffe poem.

Thanks for reading feel free to give some feedback bye!!


Monday, December 16, 2019

On My Christmas day

On Christmas I will buy presents for my family eat putting and sing Christmas songs and also enjoy my time with my family

Friday, September 6, 2019

2 Music Story Starter.

In room 9 in Writing we have been listing to Music and Writing down what is happening. We had 3 songs to pick from. My favourite song was the song called Paradise. Here is what I have done!

Friday, May 31, 2019