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Friday, May 31, 2019

My Diving story












2 comments:

  1. Good afternoon Marleigh.
    You have included some great descriptive words.It makes any story more interesting to read.I like that you have added speech marks for when you were talking.
    What powers did the special shell have?
    I look forward to your reply.
    Have a wonderful weekend.

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  2. The shell will turn you into a mermaid with magic powers i wish i was a mermaid

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