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Wednesday, November 17, 2021

Persuasive Writing Jamboard!

 Kia ora readers,

Last week in room 9 we made a jam board. We had to use the  statement from our hamburger planner. Then we made our jam board with our statement. After we got the reasons we use from the hamburger planner and then put the examples along with new examples. Finally at the end we put a conclusion at the end.

I hope you guys love my Jam board and have an brilliant day!



10 comments:

  1. Hey Marleigh, I really like your blog post but its just that when you say jam board, the two words are together like Jamboard. But other than that I really like it. That's it, bye!

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    1. Hey Sadiyah, I am glad you like my post and if we do more Jamboard stuff I'll make sure to put "Jamboard" instead of Jam board. Anyway thank you for commenting bye!

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  2. Kia orana Marleigh,
    I disagree with your statement about sharks are more dangerous than posinionous spiders because sharks only attack you if you have blood on a bandage then they attack you and also if you make it angry or annoyed it will kill you. Poisonous spiders can bite you and you could die because of the poisonous venom.
    I think spiders are more poisonous than sharks.
    Have a great day!

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    1. Hello Makayla, I guess everyone has different opinions but sharks attacking you depends. But I am glad that I heard your opinion!
      Bye have a lovely day.

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  3. Privet Marleigh,
    I am in the middle with this statement because when getting bit by a poisonous spider its poison goes into your bloodstream and it maybe fatal.
    But if you get bit by a shark you just get bit. but if the shark catches you, you may die. I like the way you setup all of your statements. have a great day. bye.

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    1. Privet Casper, Thank you for your comment. When I first heard this statement I was also in the middle too but after some thinking my opinion changed.
      I hope you have awesome day!

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  5. We might be able to kill spiders because we are bigger,but I don't think that that means that we should.If I see a spider,as long as it's not a white tail,then I will pick it up and put it outside.
    What do you do when you see a spider Marleigh?.

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    1. Hello Mrs Cassidy thank you for your statement and what you would do and think. To be honest I agree with you just never thought of it till now.
      Anyway won't be able to say merry Christmas on Christmas day so might aswell say Early Merry Christmas. Thank you your comment bye!

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  6. I am looking forward to reading your next post Marleigh...I reckon it have something to do with the last few days :)

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