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Thursday, August 13, 2020

The Present

 RA TA TA TA the lights of the tv glooming from darkness to light PEW the boy was so focused and engrossed about his game most of his attention went to the tv  .The boy had rosy red cheeks and was wearing a dark blue hoodie. His brown eyes stared at the tv.His beautiful black haired mother came in she looked tired because the  weight of the box. She was wearing a white shirt and some dark blue pants with a tiny box.The box reminded me of a hot chocolate that I drank for breakfast. The boy was really confused. His mother opened the blinds and said “open the present I got  for you”a present for me”answered the boy. He opened the box and there was a blonde tiny dog. The boy was excited at first but then his mouth dropped and his eyebrows pointed down and put a angry face. He saw 3 legs instead of 4. He threw the dog on the white carpet that looked like sheep's wool.The boy scoffed while the dog started running around the living room. The dog found a red and kicked it to the boy. The boy looked at the ball and threw it.

The dog ran over to get its ball when it rolled over inside the box that he was packed in. Just like that the dog got stuck inside the box.

The dog was moving around lots in the box eventually the dog got out the box.The boy was smiling but he turned his head away from happy to a frown. The dog ran over to get its toy holding  it in his mouth. He dropped the ball next to the boy's foot the boy was ready to make a bond with the dog. The boy got up on 1 leg and picked up some long grey crutches. While the dog was sitting there confused at how he was different. It had seemed that the dog and the boy were completely even. They finally made a bond and became best bros for Internity.


2 comments:

  1. Kia Orana Marleigh,
    Nice story it blew my socks off! I am happ that you posted something because you haven't posted in a long time! This reminds me of that video I watched 2 years ago. Next time you could put an intro before you pasted your story. I have one question before I go. How long did it took you to write down this AMAZING story? Bye have a great day!

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  2. hi Marleigh its me Jherean sup! i really like your writing i like how you say the lights of the tv glooming from the darkess to light good job have a good day :)

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