Flowers of Festival!

 Kia ora readers today I wanted to show you my drawing of a flower. In room 11 we drew a flower for the flower festival. I was also wondering if you guys had any feedback for me to help me improve my drawing. My goal is to make my drawing better than before!

Here's my drawing!

What could I do to improve my drawing?

Canterbury Swim School

hello everyone today I will be telling you about swimming at Canterbury swim school. At school we were starting swimming lessons we were doing it for 2 weeks. We went on a bus to get to the swimming pools. When we got there we sat on the benches and our instructor called our names and we got into groups. Our instructors name was Martin he was very nice! We went in the deep pool. We  learnt free style,bubble breathing, and kicking. I felt happy and excited about swimming. My goal was to get better at swimming and be better than before. Before I go I want to show you guys a video of me swimming with my friend!

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