Kia ora readers today I wanted to show you my drawing of a flower. In room 11 we drew a flower for the flower festival. I was also wondering if you guys had any feedback for me to help me improve my drawing. My goal is to make my drawing better than before!
Here's my drawing!
What could I do to improve my drawing?
Hi Marleigh. This is a great first draft. I think the shape of your flower is very straight where the original is more curved like a bowl. Do you see what I mean? Can you try to get the shape more like the orignal?
ReplyDeleteHello Marleigh.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way that you have used the pencil lightly,that way,when you want to add more detail,you can do it darker.Maybe the only thing you could do a little differently is make the petals a bit bigger.
Great job and remember,the more we practise,the better we get.🌻