Kia ora readers,
This week in room 9 we have been focusing on descriptive writing. We had to write about rock and paper. We watched a video of Rock, Paper, and Scissors. After that we had to describe them on how they look.
Here are my character descriptions of Paper and Rock!
Feel free to send feedback and comment.
Have a nice day!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
WOW Marleigh.Your written made me feel happy and then sad,especially when Paper passed away.
ReplyDeleteIt's great when children write as they can make the reader feel emotions.
What happened to Scissors? Did you run out of time to describe him?.