Hi everyone again,
Here is a piece of writing that I wrote this week. We were learning about recounts and we watched a video of thieves at a gas station robbing the store. We had to write this on our term 1 writing document,I spent atleast 2,3 days on this writing.
I hope you enjoyed my writing!
Have a nice day!
Late in the night I was in a parking lot while two fellow young men were in a car in front of a gas station.
The first man was tall, had long pink lips that had looked like it had been stretched out 10x more then normal lips. The second man was short,had lips that were 5 meters wide and had a neon blue jumper.
While watching them with suspiciousness in my eyes I saw them getting ready to walk into the shop with a big black bag. The second guy went speeding into the shop bumping into the window as if he didn't see it while the first guy walked tall and straight. I watch them as they get inside when all of the sudden the first guy grabbed his gun pointing it at the cashier and the second guy put the black bag on the desk,the cashier just stared at the two thieves until he got a chill of Sacredness up his spine the second thief ran side jumped on the shelf to the counter to end with a sore fall on the ground.
Hello Marleigh.
ReplyDeleteWell done on recounting the story with super detail.I got to see the video and you have included some good facts.
I like how you described how the tall man walked.You words gave me a good picture in my head.
Keep up the great learning and have a good week.