Talofa lava, readers
This term we have been learning to write narrative stories. The purpose of narrative writing is to catch the readers attention.
First we had to write our story on a narrative writing planner labeled with different parts of a story like characters, setting, or problem.
Then we made a google doc and put our story together from what was on the planner.
We had to include similes, full stops, settings, descriptive words, 5 senses, and problem or personification.
One of my favourite sentences is I delightfully said "hello!" whilst nervously clenching my shoulders into my chest.
One thing I could improve on is finding another word for delightful.
Have a nice day!
What a busy day you and Krystallynna have had Marleigh.You included lots of different activities-I'm guessing you both slept well that night :)
ReplyDeleteWho won the golf game?.
Sam and I have played mini golf and when we were finished,we found out we didn't play by the rules :(
Xin Chao Mrs Cassidy, suprised Krystallynna and I aren't the only ones who don't play by rules playing golf. Also good guess Krystallynna and I had an amazing sleep after that big day. Also the golf play we went to there was no competition and it was just a place to have fun you know. Anyways have a nice day!
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